Such A Beautiful Relationship Poem by Chandra Shekhar Go

Such A Beautiful Relationship

Rating: 4.7


Here no such place or temple
Scared than the 'House'
And no God and no Goddess
Bigger than the 'Parents and spouse.'

Together living with them
Is prayer and worship
So always, I love to live
Such a beautiful relationship...

Tuesday, November 21, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: house,parents,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 22 December 2023

Shame on PH for not checking with the poet to 'correct' Scared to Sacred. PH's robot-employees are sloppoy. I MEANT 'sloppy'! ! ! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 22 December 2023

Line 2: I assume 'Scared' is a TYPO, meant to be 'Sacred'! ! ! Am I wrong? ? ?

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Jayne Louise Davies 20 December 2023

Congratulations on member poem of the day! Top marks

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Freni Karaluthara 20 December 2023

The simplicity yet depth in your poem truly touches the heart. The emphasis on love and cherishing these connections encapsulates the essence of what makes life meaningful and enriching.

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Freni Karaluthara 20 December 2023

Your words paint a vivid picture of the sanctity found within the confines of the home. The comparison drawn between the house being holier than any temple and the reverence given to parents and spouse above any deity is profoundly moving.

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