Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 423,438 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Suffer Too - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Suffer too

You are two
But look true
As one entity
With lovable beauty

Aloe the freedom
With wisdom
To grow in open air
To seem natural and fair

You are not to differ
But offer
Peaceful environment
To lead at present

Love has to be shown
And made known
That you are meant for each other
Enjoy together and suffer too

Let there be no question mark
From the start
So far as the life is concerned
You got to remain as one

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Comments about Suffer Too by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (12/5/2015 9:13:00 AM)


    Wonderful blessing to a newly wed couple from a fatherly figure along with a few grains of wisdom. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/4/2015 9:17:00 PM)


    Best so far from you hasmukh. Strong prophecy. Tfs
    4 Dec by L.R. Thompson to Only two
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/4/2015 5:33:00 PM)


    Let there be no question mark
    From the start
    So far as the life is concerned
    You got to remain as one
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2015



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