Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Sugarberry Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the sugarberry tree,
I dreamed on summer days

of all the possibilities
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Barry Middleton
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Pamela Sinicrope 29 January 2016

Sigh..... I don't like to see trees or men cut down in their prime. What a loss. Again, the poem, with its simple rhyme scheme reads quite liktingly, it's sways, like the trees. Wistful. Melancholy. Thanks.

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Barry Middleton 29 January 2016

Thanks again. I am well past my prime so don't worry. I once said my poems are like my children, I love all of them but some are better than others. I like this particular poem a lot because it based on memories and experiences.

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Kim Barney 27 January 2016

Fascinating poem. I like it a lot. Never heard of a sugarberry tree before, but I do like sugar, berries, and trees! Good work.

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Barry Middleton 27 January 2016

Sugarberry is another name for hackberry. Thanks for reading and rating my poem.

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