Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Suicide (Distance) Comments

Rating: 5.0

the long slow breath
of your indifferent stare...
miles away, across the room.
your words ring hollow,
...
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Eric Cockrell
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Rajendran Muthiah 07 February 2012

In a sorrow-tinged atmosphere, you sing your verse describing a melancholy incident. I think you sing about a distant tragedy happened somewhere. Planting of flowers by the grave and dying on her cross are visual images ever remaining in the heart. A poet of peace and deep thinking! Wonderful Sir!

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