Amber Zitzloff

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Suicide, Suicide - Poem by Amber Zitzloff

Suicide, suicide wishing I were dead.
Suicide, suicide deep in my head.
Suicide, suicide cutting my wrists.
Suicide, suicide I'm so done with this.

2 days,2 days let until I die.
2 days,2 days til the last tear I'll cry.
2 days,2 days until I am all gone.
2 days,2 days til the dark breaks the dawn.

Suicide, suicide deep inside my head.
Suicide, suicide now I'm alomst dead.
Suicide, suicide turn out the light.
Suicide, suicide good bye, good night.

Comments about Suicide, Suicide by Amber Zitzloff

  • (2/5/2019 8:56:00 AM)

    Were you twelve when you wrote this It is not very creative. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/30/2019 10:26:00 PM)

    Those words are me now (Report) Reply

  • (10/27/2018 7:49:00 PM)

    How i wish i were dead (Report) Reply

  • (10/21/2018 1:50:00 PM)

    Lovely! ! Loved this poem! (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2018 12:58:00 PM)

    This is a really good poem. Side note: I hope you didn’t actually do all those things. (Report) Reply

  • (5/14/2018 9:41:00 PM)

    bruh are you okay this is really concerning (Report) Reply

  • (3/12/2018 10:49:00 AM)

    That is so good, and I DO feel like this sometimes (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2018 3:41:00 PM)

    i once did suicide but stopted
    thx to my friends who said it was bad for me
    i love life :)))
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2017 7:33:00 AM)

    Amazing. If you think that this is amazing then get on YouTube and look up 1800 logic (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2017 7:20:00 PM)

    This helped me in my sba for english I was doing suicide (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2017 11:55:00 PM)

    I won’t see 2018 bc I planned my death btw I tried to get help but no one cares (Report) Reply

  • (11/26/2017 4:23:00 PM)

    I wanna die (Report) Reply

  • (11/17/2017 12:35:00 PM)

    I feel the same way, this poem i can really relate to (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2009 10:35:00 AM)

    this poem shows exactly how i been feeling. its realii amazingg. (Report) Reply

  • (8/22/2009 5:15:00 PM)

    im 16 and ive been unhappy since i can remember i dont go out i dont trust anyone and i dont no why im an ordinary looking girl but im not normal my head aint right and ide like to say that this poem means alot to me as it is how i feel most of the time i right poetry and ide like to share it with everyone i wrote a poem called suicide similer to yours but its how i feel anyway i really liked it..lauren.. (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2009 4:16:00 PM)

    i really think you should get some help! ! ! try talking to a teacher or an adult that you trust. suicide is not the way to go pro life. (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2009 10:30:00 AM)

    love it! tatally wicked! (Report) Reply

  • (3/24/2009 3:44:00 PM)

    this is a really good poem you have gave me lots of ideas for my suicide poems (Report) Reply

  • (2/25/2009 6:20:00 PM)

    emo...but wicked! sounds like me...
    :) not really but amazing poem! best sooooooo far!
    (Report) Reply

  • (2/8/2009 3:19:00 PM)

    wow, i love it <3
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 23, 2008

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