Suicide/The End Poem by Racheal LaClair

Suicide/The End

Rating: 5.0


The pain,
The yelling,
The screaming,
Will it ever end?

Silence,
now filling the room.
My breathing slows,
fads,
almost completely.

Now,
crying for help.
'Do you hear me?
Anyone...please...'

Unknowing that the words I so desperately scream,
for others to hear,
are words that only I can hear.
Now,
the silence will be all you know of me...
It has all come to an end!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Blake 14 June 2007

wonderful poem. i love the way to expresed the silence of suicide and how ones last cries only that person hears. ten from me

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Blue Escape 14 June 2007

True.. you paint suicide as silence.... an inevitable silence. Beautiful

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Racheal LaClair

Racheal LaClair

Topeka, Kansas
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