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Suite Yourself Terrorists!

Rating: 4.7


Terrorist outfit leader
Is suffering from cancer,
Looking paler than ever,
Chances of his survival are damper.

He killed the inventor of cure for cancer.
Thus killing his last chance at survival.
He put innocent lives at stake and died himself
As part of God’s punishment for his mistakes.

Had he not dropped the bomb,
Burnt the homes or not collapsed the towers,
He would have lived to see another day, but for
Being the slayer of innocent lives, he had to pay.

His gang of terrorists are fighting to take his position
To be the new leader, they’re killing each other.
They chop their accomplices for position of authority,
In turn most lose their life when death plays naughty.

Stupid terrorists! Eclipsing their own fate
Scripting their own deaths.
Had it not been for their acts, the happiness
Of one and all in this world would have remained intact.

If only the miniscule brains of terrorists,
Could digest repercussion of which I speak
Terrorism would never have
Reached this alarming peak.

So Suite yourself terrorists!

(6 August 2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2006

There are a few human beings in the world to say 'I don't mind losing my two eyes, but he or she should lose one eye.' God created cow and cobra at the same time.

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Ashish R 18 August 2006

WOW...preeti.Send this poem to all terrorists.Let them know wat awaits them if they keep doing their thing.Nice work as always. Ashish.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 August 2006

Perspective, adaptation, depiction, perception...These are the Elements that allow you to voice your most riveting scenario....there is no stock definition for terrorism, not since september 11th,2001....the truth in fact...look up 'TERROR' IN THE DICT.....There is all you need to know in that definition, becauseit defines quite accurately how every last victim of terrorism muust feel, seconds before they know their life is through.GREAT WRITE, PREETS! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/fjr

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Muhammad Shanazar 07 August 2006

Very nice poem on 'Terrorism'' the terrorist is pale due to fatal cancer for he himself killed with his own hands his doctor therefore, there is no one to cure his malady as well as other victims of cancer; a very forceful and influential image, but sweet Preeti Datar no doubt we write poems about terrorism, we discuss it but uptill now no definition of Terrorism has been devised; everyone regards other terrorist. The most urgent issue in the world is not terrorism but accepted definition of terrorism; we can not remove it unles we make its recognition. Read my own poem on terrorism and comment; please; I shall also send you the definition of terrorism. Hugs, Muhammad Shanazar

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Catastrophe King 07 August 2006

This is a good plot for the next Bollywood movie.... I hope J.P.Dutta reads this poem and our own Preets is acclaimed for giving birth to a new story-idea! ! Great imagery Preets! ! .... You have maintained some rhythm in your narration which is gripping. I loved it very much.... You do make your imagination gallop on the mongolian horse! A 10 of course.

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