Suits Poem by Martin O'Neill

Suits

Rating: 4.7


Minds cloaked in grey
They wander the battlefield
Weilding their blades
Of nonchalance, the battle lost.
The cry of the wounded, unheeded
Cut short by the bayonets
Of the grey ones
Used without emotion
Just a soupcon of a sneer.
The Auditors pick over
The corporate bones
Of a life's work.
A family dream
Vulture necks in polycotton
Outside it starts to rain
The sandwiches go stale
Tick tock.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gone Away 16 March 2010

I agree....vultures in polycotton is a great line in a well observed and intelligent poem.

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Jacqui Thewless 13 July 2009

I agree with Susan Jarvis on this one.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 12 January 2009

Hard hitting and intense

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Ian Bowen 12 August 2008

Martin, some great lines in your very readable poem.10 Ian

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Susan Jarvis 01 August 2008

A superb analogy - 'Vulture necks in polycotton' is a magnificent line. S :)

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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