I wish my love for a summer night
For twinkling stars and the moon so bright
sweet smelling flowers and open sky
And no one around just you and I
I wish my love that night so pass
that both of us just laying on grass
Like a pillow soft on my arm's your head
And the grass beneath we make our bed
To be with you and never to sever
I wish such night may last forever
The first Octave is tremendous, rhymed well in a well knitted couplets, beautifully glides from the 3rd person to a lucky first person I... but the lost couplet didn't set well... Summer night, starry sky, flower fragrance and a silky warm touch, ohhh what love wants more... Neee volumes to appreciate....
A good start with a nice poem, Shah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A fine write with the thoughts of love.... Keep it up... You may like to read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila