Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Summer's Ending Comments

Rating: 5.0

6 stanzas...four lines each...

Summer paused on the path to pleasures of autumn dreams.
Alas! Summer's picture perfect days were soon to end.
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COMMENTS
Kelly Kurt 10 September 2015

You have a gift, Dorothy. Thank you for sharing it.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 September 2015

A beautiful and enticing look at summer, peeking at autumn through while still enjoying summer. Loved your imagery of nature, it's delicate effects on life are immense. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 September 2015

A lovely comparative poem, Loved reading it

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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