Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Summer Sun © Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summer sun is golden fire,
A gilt-edged woman, blue-flame born;
Blazing gold, uncontrolled desire,
She wakes right after light of dawn...
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Roann Mendriq
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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 April 2016

Don't play with fire, pay respect, A woman's mind is fire-flecked. Fantastic inference and advice in conclusion of the thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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