Sun Surfaced Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sun Surfaced

Rating: 5.0


Sun surfaced
With red face
Rose to height
Spread all over light

Slowly declined
Light dimmed
Stars smiled
Moon was led

Night ruled
No one was fooled
It was circle
Day and night with no troubles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 11 September 2013

Beautiful poem..beautiful words...Sun surfaced, rose to a height..Loved reading it.

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

The sun, moon and stars that light up the sky.. Philo Francis3 hours ago impressive write! TQ Comment +1 ditto

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

haiku artist3 hours ago ditto is a word that happens over again but far too often Comment +1 okay

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

Shannon Stark3 hours ago Thanks for sharing....

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

Sun surfaced With red face

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Close
Error Success