Sunday At The Cemetery Comments

The only epitapoh I remember, from Boot Hill in Kansas... 'Here lies Lester Moore Four slugs from a 44 No Les, no more.'

Herbert, for some reason I always squirm at gallows humor...but these are so well done. My favorites are numbers 18 and 20...but the more I read them, the more I giggle. It must be hilarious to get inside your head, Herbert. :) Raynette

hehe..most of these were very funny! ! They seemed to get better as you went along. perhaps a new rhyme for lid? Anyway..had me laughing this morning..thanks, I hope all is well..., off to work I go. :)

a wonderful poem. highly amusing, i know you wanted critiques on it but you shouldnt change a thing...truly a 10! ! !

Some are more amusing than others, I feel. But anyway, it's lovely to see you smiling, Herbsy. Thanks for singing my name in the forum! Love, Gina.

Herbert my friend, very funny! Reminds of the following words I found on a gravestone dated 1901 in the Walhalla cemetery some fifty years ago. 'Oh let my sudden death a warning be to all, e're while thou bendest o're my tomb Thou mightst as quickly fall. love, Alison

A long journey mein F, but you got there. And it would make it easier for us mere mortals if you'd nominate the 'age number' on which the poem fell. Ja?