Sunday Night Poem by Solomon Senxer

Sunday Night

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Staying awake this hour of midnight,
Lonely sitting without anyone,
For any kind of conversation,
In this big empty hall situation,
I feel despondent and abandoned,
As if there's no more morrow's daylight!

The dimly lit hall looks like my heart,
The bright day is gone, the night is long,
Sleep stays not and the mind is not calm,
Yes of the day's work, there is a qualm,
What possibly could I have done wrong?
I long for the dawn for a new start!

The slow whirling fan seems to not care,
The presence of many or any,
Doing what it knows and is called for,
Cooling the summer heatwave indoor,
It makes me think though ordinary,
To stay put without any despair.

Sunday Night
Sunday, September 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn ,midnight,night
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
01 September 2019
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 November 2019

" qualm an uneasy feeling of doubt, worry, or fear, especially about one's own conduct; a misgiving." last two lines: might you want a comma before " though" ? the mystery is " why is someone all alone in a 'hall' at night? " maybe she/he fell asleep during the concert and everybody else let him/her sleep as THEY left. topics aren't revealing to MyPoemList bri :)

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Solomon Senxer 13 November 2019

Comment appreciated! Thank you very much!

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