Saturday, January 7, 2012

Sunset Haiku Comments

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Rajendran Muthiah 07 January 2012

The new shortened haiku(2,5,5 syllables) with the only deletion of the 'be' verb after the second line is really exhilarating! A very condensed expression! Cheers!

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