Sunset Haiku Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Sunset Haiku

Rating: 4.5


Sunset
in our wine glasses
the glow of passion

Saturday, January 7, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: passion,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 07 January 2012

The new shortened haiku(2,5,5 syllables) with the only deletion of the 'be' verb after the second line is really exhilarating! A very condensed expression! Cheers!

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john tiong chunghoo

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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