Sunset Haiku Poem by john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia

Sunset Haiku

Rating: 4.5


Sunset
in our wine glasses
the glow of passion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 07 January 2012

The new shortened haiku(2,5,5 syllables) with the only deletion of the 'be' verb after the second line is really exhilarating! A very condensed expression! Cheers!

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john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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