Sunshine Missed Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Sunshine Missed

Rating: 5.0

flower of morning
diamond dew kissed, musk rose red
grape skies overhead

wistful in the mist
so long yearning for peach sun
green birds sing sudden

Sunshine Missed
Wednesday, December 4, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,birds,flower,flowers,green,haiku,red,rose,sunshine
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Photo by Henryk Niestroj at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful double haikus. Nature is the deepest mystery &greatest wonder..6*

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 December 2024

I am deeply gratified by your warm remarks and your super rating. Thank you very much.

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Kim Barney 04 December 2024

What's here is very good. I wanted more. You should add a few more stanzas, perhaps?

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 December 2024

Thank you so much for your interest and your lovely comments. I'm so flattered that you wanted the poem to be longer, and I will consider it. Best wishes.

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