flower of morning
diamond dew kissed, musk rose red
grape skies overhead
wistful in the mist
so long yearning for peach sun
green birds sing sudden
What's here is very good. I wanted more. You should add a few more stanzas, perhaps?
Thank you so much for your interest and your lovely comments. I'm so flattered that you wanted the poem to be longer, and I will consider it. Best wishes.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful double haikus. Nature is the deepest mystery &greatest wonder..6*
I am deeply gratified by your warm remarks and your super rating. Thank you very much.