Surely Poem by Jai K Garg

Surely

Rating: 5.0


In her aura she spoke to me words of love,
Undoing every passion she keyed to glove,
Each unnerved lie she caught like a pack of flies,
While I fumed apologized she heard my cries;

A fascinating desire I wanted to share,
With divine thoughts mingled in the lots of despair,
Was she beautiful or would I really care?
For this enchantress truly loved me to dare;

Could she be the one I relish and embrace?
Or she be the temptress to out win a race,
With her fragile soft looks in beauty and grace,
Tread the ramp of life in her unchallenged pace;

Let her peep into my heart and see the fact;
True love in life is our beauty to connect.

Wednesday, May 5, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

‘True love in life is our beauty to connect.’ Yea Ho-ho-ho to it… Sound diction…and un-fragile emotion… 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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