Survival! Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Survival!

Rating: 5.0


Life is a jungle
where everyone mingle
Vultures, eagles, snakes n all
finds their prey in dark
Rabbits, deer, cows are there- to
make the place worthwhile to share
Stronger finishes the weaker.
the fittest vanquishes
while the indisopse vanishes.

27/03/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjay Pandian 01 June 2008

Very interesting poem D. Very observant sure you are that's why you are a poetess and I'm not but am admirer of poems and through them the poets. Anyway, just saw today on AajTak, a 'Hoolock's Gibbon' Hookoo bunder terrorize not one but two tigers. Nice poem, your daughter must surely have enjoyed it. A 10 again from me. Keep smiling.

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I thought that lioness does the hunting and feeds the lion who does nothing except waiting in his den... such a nice cat, but a bit lazy though...

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