Swatting Flies Senryu Poem by Kostas Lagos

Swatting Flies Senryu



On his desk
he's swatting flies,
bored.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: boredom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 18 July 2018

WHO WAS ON WHOSE DESK? ? ? a person, a cat, another fly? i'd like it better if it read: At his desk. ; ( still i liked it..............again. :)

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Bri Edwards 02 May 2018

How could one be bored, swatting flies! ? I love to catch them off guard, by surprise! ! to MyPoemList, though I like a poem with a little more meat! bri :)

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Kostas Lagos 02 May 2018

With a cockroach maybe?

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