Swatting Flies Senryu Poem by Kostas Lagos

Swatting Flies Senryu



On his desk
he's swatting flies,
bored.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 18 July 2018

WHO WAS ON WHOSE DESK? ? ? a person, a cat, another fly? i'd like it better if it read: At his desk. ; ( still i liked it..............again. :)

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Bri Edwards 02 May 2018

How could one be bored, swatting flies! ? I love to catch them off guard, by surprise! ! to MyPoemList, though I like a poem with a little more meat! bri :)

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Kostas Lagos 02 May 2018

With a cockroach maybe?

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