The Sun Melts The Snow (Tanka) Poem by Kostas Lagos

The Sun Melts The Snow (Tanka)

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The sun melts the snow

revealing the barren earth

left with no trace of life;

I cry for my broken heart

that has no more blood to shed

Saturday, February 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,pain,snow,sun
Rini Shibu 03 February 2018

Sun Melts the snow revealing the barren earth.. Good one

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Kostas Lagos 03 February 2018

Thank you! I have some good moments now and then.

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 03 February 2018

A lost love 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kostas Lagos 03 February 2018

Ευχαριστώ πολύ! (That's Thank you very much in greek)

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M Asim Nehal 05 January 2019

On a very serious note the outcry of a sensible heart, enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this wonderful Tanka.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 November 2021

I am there with you, bro, I am there

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M.J. Lemon 17 November 2021

A fantastic image of vulnerability. Excellent verse, Kostas.

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Mihai Brinas 15 May 2021

A highly enjoyable experience!

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Bharati Nayak 11 February 2021

Pain and sadness of a broken heart find beautiful expression in this poem.

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Ric Bastasa 05 February 2021

καθώς ο γιος λιώνει το χιόνι περιμένω άλλη μια μέρα κολύμβησης και ψάρεμα στη λίμνη

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