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The Sun Melts The Snow (Tanka)

Rating: 4.8
The sun melts the snow

revealing the barren earth

left with no trace of life;

I cry for my broken heart

that has no more blood to shed
Saturday, February 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,pain,snow,sun
Bharati Nayak 11 February 2021
Pain and sadness of a broken heart find beautiful expression in this poem.
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Ric Bastasa 05 February 2021
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Unwritten Soul 19 January 2021
The imagery! Its painful to see... Thus it made this work expensive!
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Luz Hanaii 17 January 2021
A five star rating from me. I like the comparison of barren earth to a broken heart with no more blood to shed.
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Robert Murray Smith 05 January 2021
Fantastic poetry. To my favourites.
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David Wood 05 January 2021
I can feel the pain in this poem, pain of the earth and joined with the pain of human suffering
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Captain Cur 05 January 2021
A poignant write full of human pain and longing.
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Gibran Ibrahim 03 January 2021
'That has no more blood to shed.' Beautiful!
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Anjandev Roy 01 January 2021
Superb piece....thank u, dear poet.
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Bharati Diggikar 09 December 2020
So simple, so effective..
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