The sun melts the snow
revealing the barren earth
left with no trace of life;
I cry for my broken heart
that has no more blood to shed
A lost love 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
On a very serious note the outcry of a sensible heart, enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this wonderful Tanka.
Pain and sadness of a broken heart find beautiful expression in this poem.
καθώς ο γιος λιώνει το χιόνι περιμένω άλλη μια μέρα κολύμβησης και ψάρεμα στη λίμνη
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sun Melts the snow revealing the barren earth.. Good one
Thank you! I have some good moments now and then.