Thursday, July 9, 2009

Sweet Revenge Comments

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all alone i have cried
wiping teardrops from my eyes.
hiding the pain that i'm in
wondering if in love, i'll ever win.
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louis rams
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uh hmn. this happened to me.........................

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 July 2009

I personal feel if you truly love someone we will wish them to be happy forever in there life. Thats what love is in fact for me. Sorry to say this poems initial beginning is nice latter i felt those lines are not true by its way of ending. But you had expressed your theme very well.

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a pain which i feel no revenge will soothe...being taken for a ride by a loved one the worst in life...very well written

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Melodz Caserial 09 July 2009

hi..... u know what? ? ur poems such like what also happened to me! ! u make me cry.. thanks! ! ! just keep in touch! ! !

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