Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 21,178 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Sylvan Ruler Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

The horned king surveys

domain of hills and valleys

fragile survival


Comments about Sylvan Ruler Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Barbara Terry (10/15/2008 8:59:00 AM)

    Mother nature is replete with many such creatures that just survey their 'kingdms'. The rattlesnake shakes it's tail to warn intruders that 'this is my kingdom, stay away' Just as the lioness is ruler of her kingdom in the Serengeti, and all survival is fragile to any creature large or small, including human.

    This is written very well and has the proper number of syllables. WRITE ON! ! ! ! !

    Hugs,
    Barbara
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 15, 2008



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