Tajmahal, A Love Dome Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Tajmahal, A Love Dome

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Beautiful creation of the Lord on earth
should be remembered for time to come,
what an eyes like shining diamonds,
rose may not have shine as her face,

God might have thought in spare time,
Perfect match and suitable kind,
Kind always kept her live in mind,
Was so happy with lovely find,

What would be fate when I am no more?
Who will sing and who will adore,
I must think and ways explore,
Ship should not sink before reaching shore,

I may be killed, buried underground or even poisoned,
Empire may be snatched and not even pardoned,
May be confined within walls and area cordoned,
So more happiness or safety idea altogether abandoned,


'Love Dom' for queen in unique style,
Thought emperor but in worry while,
even when empire is razed or lost,
should be the centre of attraction most,

Oh, Mumtazmahal, I will try my best,
marvelous creation and unique test,
World to wonder and still ponder,
What a message from ardent lover

Neither you nor the memory will fade,
Place for lovers where love not forbade,
you will be remembered for long and decades,
Nothing will be lost even attempted to invade

'Taj'(crown) will adore your head,
Your names in history will always lead
love songs not less than hymns are read,
Peace and calm prevail before night dead,

Though it may be called as dome
Remain it as your permanent home,
It won’t be less than huge palace,
People may visit and offer solace,

All true lovers will offer tribute,
though world at large can’t contribute,
Exclaim with words and love distribute,
All glory and feat to kings attribute,

I may be killed, buried underground or even poisoned,
Empire may be snatched and not even pardoned,
May be confined within walls and area cordoned,
So more happiness or safety idea altogether abandoned,


Mumtajmahal is the name of queen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

Beautiful creation of the Lord on earth should be remembered for time to come, what an eyes like shining diamonds,

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Shilpa Maheswari 07 October 2009

What would be fate when I am no more? Who will sing and who will adore, I must think and ways explore,

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Kamli Kamal 07 October 2009

God might have thought in spare time, Perfect match and suitable kind,

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Kashi Paul 06 October 2009

Sing of continuous activities, All for good and best utilities,

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Umesh Lalvani 06 October 2009

'Love Dom' for queen in unique style, Thought emperor but in worry while, even when empire is razed or lost,

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Rinki Nandy 18 January 2010

Taj is in the memory of love, i like your rhyming without missing a line. you have described their love in a beautiful manner.

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Venkat Ramanna 10 October 2009

Beautiful creation of the Lord on earth should be remembered for time to come, what an eyes like shining diamonds, rose may not have shine as her face,

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K.v. Subbarao 10 October 2009

Beautiful creation of the Lord on earth should be remembered for time to come, what an eyes like shining diamonds, rose may not have shine as her face,

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Sulochna Pandit 09 October 2009

Beautiful creation of the Lord on earth should be remembered for time to come, what an eyes like shining diamonds,

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Raju Rajput 09 October 2009

I may be killed, buried underground or even poisoned, Empire may be snatched and not even pardoned,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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