Your poetic views are good
but you must try
and
take charge of your life
rogues abound everywhere
and
only you can for yourself care
guard yourself
a voice always tell me
make a wise decision
no one else will lose
if you let
EGO
overrule
be thoughtful
life has many hurdles
so you alone must row your boat
don't let anyone else fiddle
not even this silly poet
interfering
no not really
trying to voice my own experiences
in this vast worldly valley
full of bigotry
one does experience daily
not only me
no not really trying to voice my own experiences in this vast worldly valley full of bigotry one does experience daily not only me, ..... um- hu -m, ..... you are an experienced poet, says your poems
age wise maybe I have studied the human mind for over so many decades but love to stan ANON thanks
life has many hurdles so you alone must row your boat don't let anyone else fiddle, ...... truly written, thanks for sharing
guard yourself a voice always tell me make a wise decision no one else will lose if you let EGO overrule be thoughtful, ....... wisely penned
only you can for yourself care ......... yes truly, wisely and logically said,
take charge of your life rogues abound everywhere, ..... from deep observation these two lines have come, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very thoughtful and sensible piece of advice to the upcoming poets. Thanks, Dear Friend. I quote: take charge of your life / no one else will lose / if you let EGO / overrule /....so you alone must row your boat....
tank you so muchlyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee