Take It To World Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Take It To World

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Word with smile
What is there to write?
About person or her smile
But yes it is needed
When you are added

You are in friendship list
And I certainly insist
About the people with personality
It makes them special with relativity

Her smile lets it known]
She lives by her own
Keeps world intact
And comes out with open fact

Lady keep smiling
With underlining
'Smile brings people together'
As it has become costlier

People hardly laugh and burst
As if they have no trust
In mankind or nature
It is real treasure

I greet her
And offer
With one word
Take it to the open world

Take It To World
Wednesday, January 20, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2016

I greet her And offer With one word Take it to the open world

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 January 2016

Smile brings people together As it has become costlier. It has become a fact. Nicely penned narration of the prevailing situation. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 January 2016

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 January 2016

Shirley Macclean., ., .ONE FOR THE ROAD Why do women make you wait so much he asked me I said you pay a high price for making a first CD once only Rest think! he smiled and asked me how much? He was 9plus! i was NON PLUSSED..... HAHAHAHaaa Unlike · Reply · 1 · 6 hrs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 January 2016

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 January 2016

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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