DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

Take It While You Can.. - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

LONG and empty faces keep their
eyes on the television screen,
FIRE flies jockeying for
position, on a cold and quiet
dream,
A murmer of sounds coming from
your head, or is it the rain,
wind, or a song from, i loved
you once, but now i must pack
up and leave.
LONG and empty faces......


Comments about Take It While You Can.. by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (8/7/2006 11:02:00 PM)


    Minimum words and maximum meaning.... I really like your style of writing

    Anjana
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/4/2006 4:19:00 PM)


    TRYING TO DIVIDE THE LINE FROM BETWEEN SEVERAL THEORYS...DREAM...EXPERIENCE...PERCEPTION, ALL OF WHICH ADDS UP TO A GOOD READER-TEASE & INTRIGUE...10! ''''''''''FRANK (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/4/2006 4:19:00 PM)


    TRYING TO DIVIDE THE LINE FROM BETWEEN SEVERAL THEORYS...DREAM...EXPERIENCE...PERCEPTION, ALL OF WHICH ADDS UP TO A GOOD READER-TEASE & INTRIGUE...10! ''''''''''FRANK (Report) Reply

  • (3/19/2006 4:36:00 PM)


    Something very sad in this, a separation of somekind maybe.Reminising on past events.Or present break up.Hope you are well.Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • (3/19/2006 3:42:00 PM)


    FOR A FRIEND........................... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 19, 2006



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