Sunday, March 19, 2006

Take It While You Can.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

LONG and empty faces keep their
eyes on the television screen,
FIRE flies jockeying for
position, on a cold and quiet
...
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Anjana Aravind 07 August 2006

Minimum words and maximum meaning.... I really like your style of writing Anjana

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TRYING TO DIVIDE THE LINE FROM BETWEEN SEVERAL THEORYS...DREAM...EXPERIENCE...PERCEPTION, ALL OF WHICH ADDS UP TO A GOOD READER-TEASE & INTRIGUE...10! ''''''''''FRANK

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TRYING TO DIVIDE THE LINE FROM BETWEEN SEVERAL THEORYS...DREAM...EXPERIENCE...PERCEPTION, ALL OF WHICH ADDS UP TO A GOOD READER-TEASE & INTRIGUE...10! ''''''''''FRANK

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Duncan Wyllie 19 March 2006

Something very sad in this, a separation of somekind maybe.Reminising on past events.Or present break up.Hope you are well.Love Duncan

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David Gerardino 19 March 2006

FOR A FRIEND...........................

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