Take Me Along Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Take Me Along

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Take me along


When early breeze was setting in
I had seen her
In full glare
I simply stared

I found no words
So praised lord
With simple request
To chose the best

I saw deep sea in her eyes
And tried to swim
But she was not within reach
Yet I tried as such

I could not look at her
When she offered
'Take me along'
I heard it and was proved wrong

The moon was on earth
I decided to defy death
'Will you as you said now'
Can you tell me how?

'Like this' and she led me forward
She was within reach as lovable friend
I had seen in her true ally
On earth she was real beauty

'Who cares for world? '
I whispered self and told
I was required to be bold
As she was now in my fold

Take Me Along
Monday, December 7, 2015
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 December 2015

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Rajnish Manga 08 December 2015

This is indeed a wonderful tribute to a woman's beauty that is so charming and enticing. In the beginning she looked beyond reach but with the passage of time 'I was required to be bold..... As she was now in my fold'. Amazing poem. Thanks for sharing. I quote: I saw deep sea in her eyes / And tried to swim / But she was not within reach / I was required to be bold / As she was now in my fold.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 December 2015

beautiful sir, namaskar, I like it most..

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