Allen Steble

Rookie - 110 Points (20/04/1987)

**take Me With You(Wherever You Go) ** - Poem by Allen Steble

take me to the place
where a waterfall
really is a waterfall
deep dark blue
take me with you

take me to a place
where a sunset
really is a sunset
bright orange and violet
i don't care what colour
just take me with you

take me to a place
where a rainbow
really is a rainbow
red, orange, green and blue
indigo, violet and yellow to
take me with you

take me to a place
where the snow
really is snow
take me to that place
i would love to go
to go with you

take me anywhere
where you go
where you really go
i will follow you
together we will go
take me with you

Comments about **take Me With You(Wherever You Go) ** by Allen Steble

  • (5/5/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    I loved the repetitive lines that just exacerbate the feelings of loneliness and yearning. A great write, Allen. I could so easily relate. We want reality, our reality, with someone real, so we can be real in turn. So lovely. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/17/2009 10:35:00 AM)


    You are soooo sentimental, a beliver in the magic of love...take me with you, you plea, Oh, I hope she does...if not, try, try, again...there is always someone out there waiting to be good to you.
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  • (12/15/2008 11:01:00 PM)

    i love how simple the language is.
    No matter if you are just barily know english you can understand this poem.
    and it makeas it perfect that way.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, December 29, 2008

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