Take Your Time Poem by Sarah Persson

Take Your Time

Rating: 4.0


Take your time with your soft tone
And bitter sweet promise,
For your gentle tone claws
At my heart strings, time locks,
I've looked in your eyes
And I've searched through the wells,
Where the walls sink much deeper
Passed slippery rocks.

Can you reach with your hands
And take fear from my face,
The scents expose almost,
An invisible mask,
I've worn your lies willingly
And I've drowned, decomposed,
All my strength now abandoned,
My heart leaps to your grasp.

Sunday, November 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,honesty,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 20 November 2017

Hi sarah, Penetrating ideas/themes, gripping images, and finest rhythm. Marvelous write. Let me just quote: : : At my heart strings, time locks, : : I've looked in your eyes : : And I've searched through the wells, : : Where the walls sink much deeper: : Wow! ! A 100++++

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George Dietz 19 November 2017

Love with remorse? Confliction? A poem that makes you think! ! Great job

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Sarah Persson 19 November 2017

Thank you George. I guess it's the thought that runs through many minds, should we try again? Is it worth it? Thank you for your comments George

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