Thursday, October 19, 2006

Tale Of Mirrors Comments

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Once, on a bright sunny day,
A lady walked into my store.
Oh yes, my store of crystals and mirrors.
A lady well dressed,
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Lakshmi Sreedharan
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Caterpillar MC 22 October 2006

good one lakshmi...theres a slight prose style...yet its a good one.

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Ashish R 19 October 2006

A good write.Welcome to PH. Ashish.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 19 October 2006

dear lakshmi, you should read slyvia plath's mirror and see how she tackle the same theme. yours is good too except you try to explain what everybody already knew. i commit the same mistakes too. write more and read more and you will soon be able to get rid of the cliche. sincerely, john.

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