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Tale Of Mirrors

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Once, on a bright sunny day,
A lady walked into my store.
Oh yes, my store of crystals and mirrors.
A lady well dressed,
In her late 30s I suppose.

I got to business,
“Yes ma’am, how can I help you? ”
“I would like too see some mirrors,
The finest ones of course! ” said the lady.
As asked for I went around my store
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Caterpillar MC 22 October 2006
good one lakshmi...theres a slight prose style...yet its a good one.
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Ashish R 19 October 2006
A good write.Welcome to PH. Ashish.
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John Tiong Chunghoo 19 October 2006
dear lakshmi, you should read slyvia plath's mirror and see how she tackle the same theme. yours is good too except you try to explain what everybody already knew. i commit the same mistakes too. write more and read more and you will soon be able to get rid of the cliche. sincerely, john.
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