*tanka 2: Sparrow Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

*tanka 2: Sparrow

Rating: 2.9


sparrow
fluffs his feathers
dust bathing
I tried it once
just got dirtier

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 28 June 2009

I love the alliterative puff of dust as the sparrow 'fluffs his feathers'; great image, and then - the humorous twist. Superb! S :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Amazing poem. Love it. 10+++ with pleasure.

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