Tapestry Of Life Poem by Kaila George

Tapestry Of Life



I see life
Like a Tapestry

Were you weave
In and out of life
As the journey unfolds

Each thread
Inter woven in your dreams
Have vibrant colours
That burst into being
That burst into life

Then often as in life
You have the black
Grey and white
The hidden nightmares
The hidden dreams
The shadows of life

The beauty of it all
Is how each thread
Intertwines its way through life

Each colour vibrant
With each thread you sew
Even the shadows
Bring out the colours
On a tapestry of Gold

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not sure if I should of used in the last stanz Gold or life. Seamed appropriate at the time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 27 June 2012

Extremely well presented, every word resonated with perfect cadence and emotion, I love each stanza especially the fourth, and you really shouldn't complain about the last line it works wonderfully, and you should not change it let it stand on its own. A favourite of yours.

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You have an impressive command of structurral movement...Enjoyed the flow and storyline as well...~FjR~

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