Kaila George

Freshman - 983 Points (20 October 1962 / New Zealand)

Can He Really See What I See - Poem by Kaila George

The night sky shone of glittering stars
as she gazed upon the splendor
and wondered does my true love
See the same stars I see
can he feel the same breeze
That caresses my cheeks
As I stare into the sunsets of old
Does he see how the stars
Are arranged in the sky
For star gazers to depict
What they believe is there
in the night filled skies
Does he feel the sand?
as he visits a beach
a lake that shines and glitters in the sun
Can he hear the birds that sing to thee
Sweet songs of melodies
I reach out to him
and hold him close
But grasping thin air
I sigh with a note
of despair at not seeing
My loved one hands
Sharing the sights and sounds
Of what Mother Nature gave to thee
Can he really see what I see

Comments about Can He Really See What I See by Kaila George

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/12/2015 1:31:00 PM)

    *****does he interpret***** (Report) Reply

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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/12/2015 12:18:00 PM)

    Oh yes..this happens to me...sometimes i wonder if the one i love sees the world as I see it, ,
    Does he interprets things the way I do..

    But anyway, ... if he doesn't...then tell him...let him see things the way you do
    And for sure..happiness felt, when shared, is so priceless

    I Love Your Poem Madam
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  • Captain Cur (6/9/2014 11:35:00 AM)

    I would venture to say if the person is with you absolutely.
    Enjoyed this work keep smiling and wishing on stars.
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  • (6/9/2014 9:38:00 AM)

    Expression of the deep love in such a good poem and it is nice. (Report) Reply

  • Francis Lynch (6/9/2014 9:13:00 AM)

    Nice write. Economy of words and words working hard. (Report) Reply

  • Soumita Sarkar (6/9/2014 1:51:00 AM)

    Nice write...good flow..................blank verse. (Report) Reply

  • (6/10/2013 10:32:00 PM)

    I'm glad this was poem of the day Kaila its one of your best! (Report) Reply

  • Godfrey Morris (6/9/2013 8:01:00 PM)

    Great poem Kaila. Love the descriptions and strong emotions conveyed. (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2013 5:14:00 AM)

    a good poem that deserves to be poem of the day. It might be worth using a question mark,
    Can He Really See What I See? is grammatically a question...
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  • (6/12/2012 9:54:00 PM)

    This is a picture of pure phantasmagorical elegance, its accentuated with romantic innocents that it puts me in the mind of where you are. Its seems simplistic but the feelings you posses are complex and intricate, even if your lover does not see the stars, then he should understand your words. Great stuff (Report) Reply

  • Besa Dede (6/10/2012 11:09:00 AM)

    Very lovely poem, full of description and feeling. I like the way the poem is composed; it has a natural and continuous flow, making the reader enjoy the depiction of the narration. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.
    Warm regards,

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  • Anita Sehgal (6/10/2012 6:11:00 AM)

    very nicely expressed! (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2012 9:45:00 AM)

    Poetry as it's supposed to be. (Report) Reply

  • Sharad Juneja (6/9/2012 9:33:00 AM)

    Kaila beautiful... right from the word go...fantastic :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2012 1:03:00 AM)

    probably not but he cares (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (6/9/2012 12:54:00 AM)

    Nature presented well with the passion of sharing beauty with the beloved one. Well. (Report) Reply

  • Simon Collins (5/23/2012 10:55:00 PM)

    Really touching poem, deep, thanks (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2011 12:38:00 PM)

    Dear Sister of My Soul.....you have written my heart to the universe...hugs you so tight.....so wonderful to read your works....love you my sister. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (11/15/2011 9:41:00 PM)

    You really have presented to the Poetry World a reservoir of beautiful and penning words that clearly manifests your great poetic talent! Great job done here! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ God Bless You for always and keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 16, 2011

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