Placed deep in my front pocket;
Lays a sercet of unknown strength.
Written so carefully by a trembling hand;
Dotted with tears no one sees fall.
Ripped around the edges;
Sliced through the middle to show my broken heart.
For you have destroyed my whole world
I'm going to do the same to yours.
A few little words is all its going to take;
To show you that the strongest can break.
You'll laugh it off when I show whats in my hand
But you'll regret ever leaving me like you did.
With shaking fingers I'll hand you whats inside
Give you the words that are filled with no lies.
You'll shed the tears just like I planned to do
For it is your tattered love note;
You wrote for you.
this poem is amazing to! ! ! its very creative and the use of words is perfect. you had grabbed my attention just bye the title! ! ! it has so much meaning to it and i can picture evything going on! ! . keep it up! ! !
absolutly beautiful....very good..i give this a 10...i love it
I liked this piece. Truly brilliant. Breakups are always hard. Well penned. Worthy of another 10.......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderfully written piece! ! ! Nice job!