Tears; I Love Thee Poem by Kazi Ahmed

Tears; I Love Thee

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Then I turned back; and told you ‘bye'
I saw dropp of tears in your eye
It was decided that we will leave
You looked indifferent till last minute
But when that moment came
You could not check
I also could not resist
Departing is so heart breaking,
I could not persist
Tears also fell from my eyes
I kept on looking at you
As if this was our first meet
The train came and left, unnoticed.

Tuesday, September 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 29 September 2011

Nice sentiments, good expression.The tone of the poem is appealing. Marks 10

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 September 2011

.convincing pain..sweet at the end.. vividly portrayed in your lines.. wonderful and touching as a whole..

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Vipins Puthooran 28 September 2011

Nice poem, you draw the pain here...

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Vipins Puthooran 28 September 2011

Nice poem, you draw the pain here...

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Kazi Ahmed

Kazi Ahmed

Dhaka, Bangladesh
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