Tears Of A Depressed Man Poem by Abdellah khalfi

Tears Of A Depressed Man

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Counting stars in the sky is all I can do
Letting the cold spread all over my body
Shedding tears sometimes is all I can do
Cutting my veins and bleed
And taking a bath in my blood
Dreaming about my old self to be back
Straggling to live another day
Waiting for my long night to end
This is all I can do
Trying to figure out the raison
When I'm awake and when I slept
But I couldn't do either
I neither know when nor where
Such a quiet monster had came
I could hardly believe it
I'd tried to end my preciouslife

Friday, November 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 06 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Abdellah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Abdellah Khalfi 07 November 2018

Thank you Jazib

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 November 2018

taking a bath in my blood Dreaming about my old self to be back Straggling to live another day Waiting for my long night to end.....NO depression can conquer you if you are in contact with God in prayer. Rely on God......... God will guide you. be certain about it. tony

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Abdellah Khalfi 03 November 2018

thank you tony, be at ease I'm working hard

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Dave Walker 02 November 2018

Depression can be one of the hardest things to beat, but you can beat it. A great poem.

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Abdellah Khalfi 03 November 2018

thank you so much my friend Dave Walker for your supporting words and thanks for passing by

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