Saturday, June 6, 2009

Teen Dream Come True Comments

Rating: 5.0

it was a summer nights dream, not a cloud to be seen
the sky a beautiful orange red
i saw you and i thought that i was dead.
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Christine Kerr 08 June 2009

Interesting school days, There are just so many close calls back then. But I've ran into so many of them after and the thought process starts all over again in a different light. Such a different feeling when memories and the present come together. Glad to see a happy ending.10+++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 08 June 2009

a beautiful romantic poem...........

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Kranthi Pothineni 08 June 2009

Really nice narration skills you have. Very well oven.

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Heather S 06 June 2009

awww, this is very cute and oh so true, eyes always intrest me and beautiful eyes make my day wonderful poem

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