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Telephone

Rating: 5.0

My telephone is dead.
I can not contact with outside world
I can contact with outside world
By letter.
But I have no time.
I am lazy by the technology.
After a few days,
Suddenly my telephone rang
I thought ‘Is it the sound of Telephone
Or the sound of dead world’?

I can not understand.
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Elizabeth Marco 11 July 2009

Technology does make us lazier. It was good. Keep writing!

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Surya . 11 July 2009

beautiful idea, beatifuly written.enjoyed reading. voted10 surya

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Bele Lele 09 July 2009

This poem is different....

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Goody goody…sweet finish… Thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Sukumar Choudhuri 02 March 2010

Good one! But it could be better! !

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John Orr 27 February 2010

I like your soliloquy.

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Allemagne Roßmann 27 February 2010

My telephone is dead. I can not contact with outside world I can contact with outside world By letter. When you are not dead telephone does not matter

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Ency Bearis 11 July 2009

a soliloquy with meaning.....great poem to ponder...

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