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There was a pleasant garden.
All the class of society
Gets entrance to there.
This garden was look like a god gifted
And Covering with dream.
However, where its end, nobody can’t know.
Because the north side was cover with snow
Children has come to play,

Old man has come to spare time with others,
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Janice Etienne 10 August 2008

i think i understand. is it kinda like when a children loses their innocence and from then on it's never really the same?

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Marieta Maglas 21 September 2009

It is a symbolistic and a narrative poem at the same time, a portrait very well done, a poem written with very much talent and its message is very clear.This deity of goodness cannot be killed.Thank you for sharing. 10++++++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

A nice poem. The concluding lines are very beautiful- 'Today the sunlight does not fall on the face of female deity. In afternoon, the sunlight does not Touch of one’s feet. In the cource of time the female desity Lost her glorious majesty.' Love it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2008

Yap I enjoyed it...........10

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Colin Jeffery 26 August 2008

A very deep and moving poem. Great work

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Marilyn Lott 12 August 2008

There is a lot of meaning here, and takes some time to study this poem. It is definitely worth the study. Thanks for submitting it and keep sending us poems that will spur our thoughts and imagination. Very good! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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