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this one caught and kept my attention until the end its so sad how ppl treat each other....or how we don't appreciate what we have until its too late

. Sensing negativity towards you, (in actions + attitude) , from a girl, you love + care for - is a hard burden to bear, especially when this person is, obviously, in DENIAL. 'Tell me...Tell me....Tell me....' and your response to her be...''You're wrong! ! ! ! '' Favorite line? Last line! ''What I'm seeing, 'I feel 'like you're telling me all of that.'' (Clever wording!) Excellent poem! Really stirs the emotions. Deanna xx