white dove

Rookie - 113 Points (09-10-1992)

Tell Me Whats Wrong - Poem by white dove

Tell me o dear,
Tell me what’s wrong,
Just to give me an answer,
Why does it take so long?

Did I hurt u unknowing?
Did I say some thing unright?
Did I do anything incorrect?
Did I pick up a fight?

Tell me dear friend,
Tell me soon.
Cos I spend the nights
Tossing under the moon.

Why don’t you talk to me?
Why don’t you smile?
Why do you hurt me?
These questions are a pile!

Just tell me whats wrong,
And tell me what you feel
So I can clear the misconceptions
And my wounds can heal

And do next time around,
Hide from me never,
Cos u matter to me a lot
Now, and forever!


Comments about Tell Me Whats Wrong by white dove

  • (2/15/2010 8:07:00 AM)


    hey white dove,
    This is seriosly an awesome piece of work..post it in a way that it reaches ur friend, ...he/she 'll surely turn to u..coz this poem is really driving the feelings..! ! keep writing..pls comment on ma poems too.
    regards,
    shyam.
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  • Dulakshi Wakista (2/15/2010 4:22:00 AM)


    Wow! It's a great poem.Oh your friend should proud about you.Coz you've written this poem for your friend.Don't worry your friend will talk to you soon.Great work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 15, 2010



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