I love you,
I need you,
I want you,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
You're beautiful,
You're funny,
You're strong,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
I'm trying,
I'm hurting,
I'm yours,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
You kiss me,
You touch me,
You have me,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
Is it me?
Is it you?
Is it her?
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
We'd be happy,
We'd be stable,
We'd be more,
If you could
Tell me you love me.
hey this is sweet way of expressing yourself indeed....emotions seems to flow out spontaneously. cheers to your my beloved friend 10++
Nice persuasive write-up... Repetition of words gives impressive effect.. You convey what you want to say without even an iota haziness.10 +++++ Regards Kushal
I like the structure you have. The repetition of a phrase is always a good device. I also liked the purpose behind this writing. And the focus was clear. Good job. GW62
I love you............................... good poem. hehe
i really enjoyed this poem it was really welll written and im always a sucker for love peotry... so 10/10 here
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sweet and cute. 10 for this lovely poem.10+++