Tell Me You Love Me Poem by Toni Bellanger

Tell Me You Love Me

Rating: 4.9


I love you,
I need you,
I want you,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

You're beautiful,
You're funny,
You're strong,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

I'm trying,
I'm hurting,
I'm yours,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

You kiss me,
You touch me,
You have me,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

Is it me?
Is it you?
Is it her?
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?

We'd be happy,
We'd be stable,
We'd be more,
If you could
Tell me you love me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 04 June 2009

Sweet and cute. 10 for this lovely poem.10+++

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Akram Awadat 04 June 2009

wow, lovely poem i like it thanks

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Shashendra Amalshan 04 June 2009

hey this is sweet way of expressing yourself indeed....emotions seems to flow out spontaneously. cheers to your my beloved friend 10++

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Loved it..Loved the aggression...Brishti Mazumdar

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really really good 10+

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 August 2009

Love is beautiful and ugly.Your poem is beautiful!

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Kushal Vaishnani 06 June 2009

Nice persuasive write-up... Repetition of words gives impressive effect.. You convey what you want to say without even an iota haziness.10 +++++ Regards Kushal

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 June 2009

I like the structure you have. The repetition of a phrase is always a good device. I also liked the purpose behind this writing. And the focus was clear. Good job. GW62

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I love you............................... good poem. hehe

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James Fumich 04 June 2009

i really enjoyed this poem it was really welll written and im always a sucker for love peotry... so 10/10 here

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