Tempestuous Poem by Pamela Dietz

Tempestuous



He came rushing in. The wind blew the hair away from my face.He held my hands constantly stroking my palms and fingers. The thunder grumbled somewhere in the distance. He awakened a feeling that had been asleep for years. The rumbling was coming closer to where I stood. His hand went to my chin, and our lips joined like a key to a lock. The lightning hit the ground, not far away. I ran for cover knowing I was not in control of what was coming next.

Sunday, January 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marianne McCann 28 January 2020

Nice. Who are your influences?

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Ravi Kopra 26 January 2020

He came rushing in. The wind blew the hair away from my face. He held my hands constantly stroking my palms and fingers. The thunder grumbled somewhere in the distance. He awakened a feeling that had been asleep for years. The rumbling was coming closer to where I stood. His hand went to my chin, and our lips joined like a key to a lock. The lightning hit the ground, not far away. I ran for cover knowing I was not in control of what was coming next.

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