temple of my soul give me joy
spiritually and mentally make me smile
take my mortale parts and make them smile
for within you lies the secrect of ecstasy
temple of my soul hear me speak
please give me the joy i seek
you are humble and also meek
teach me your technique
temple of my soul take me home
for in this place i am alone
drag my body along your grounds
take me beyond these mortale bounds
i like the message of this poem very much. the desire to build yourself up and become stronger internally is evident........10
seeking solace and strength from within, from the inner cloister of cosmic force...well done
nice cognitive metaphor: 'temple of my soul hear me speak'' well written poem........10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love the way you put the poem together...very good very...