Temptation Poem by Ballerina With Fins

Temptation

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I am both the Adam and Eve in my story, male and female,
I am entwined together. Me, sitting quietly,
holding my own hand; it feels so soft.

Hello, you, love, you are naked and unabashed; I have
told you this, blatant I.
You close your eyes, blazing and brilliant like the sun.
Tonight you shall feed on this vicious knowledge, hold me tight
and burn.

I will never be lonely, with me, me and myself,
feeding on the murky sap of the Apple of Paradise.

Friday, September 1, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: lonely
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 10 September 2006

The seduction of the self by the self. I like it. Yin and yang in one.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 September 2006

Abstract concept with awesome statement for todays genre...a fine penning Ms. B. W/ fINS''''''''''''''''FJR(W/O FINS)

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