Temptation Poem by Ballerina With Fins

Temptation

Rating: 5.0


I am both the Adam and Eve in my story, male and female,
I am entwined together. Me, sitting quietly,
holding my own hand; it feels so soft.

Hello, you, love, you are naked and unabashed; I have
told you this, blatant I.
You close your eyes, blazing and brilliant like the sun.
Tonight you shall feed on this vicious knowledge, hold me tight
and burn.

I will never be lonely, with me, me and myself,
feeding on the murky sap of the Apple of Paradise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 10 September 2006

The seduction of the self by the self. I like it. Yin and yang in one.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 September 2006

Abstract concept with awesome statement for todays genre...a fine penning Ms. B. W/ fINS''''''''''''''''FJR(W/O FINS)

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