The Hollow Girl Poem by Ballerina With Fins

The Hollow Girl

Rating: 4.5


She, under her
Big smile stows
away
the unhappy memories
she wants to be
the perfect happy
person in
this world and

everyone would love
Her and she
Kids
herself, she kids
herself of what
she really

is And she is
the empty shell
waiting to be filled

And she is
the little los t orphan
waiting to be found

And she is
the blank book
waiting to be written in

and she is
hollow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 13 October 2015

So sad indeed as this hollow girl wears such a mask. You paint such a clear picture for all to see and heed the words of wisdom.....

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Brian Dorn 28 October 2006

There is nothing hollow about this poem. Deep in fact... but not hollow. Great write! Brian

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Nimal Dunuhinga 19 October 2006

The hollow girl sings a sad song of hidden beauty?

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Uriah Hamilton 19 November 2005

You're hollow now, but fill yourself with mystic beauty! Please be well!

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Jon Lloyd 17 November 2005

I agree with sally - very moving, personal yet universal, as with all great poetry. Jon.

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