Tuesday, June 13, 2017

Terror's Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

the cloud has covered up the blue
the gray has banished all our hope
and everything we thought we knew
to rob from us the will to cope
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 22 June 2017

Terror's cloud hovering over the world is a cause of real concern for mankind. A heart-touching tribute to innocent people who lost their lives. Beautiful metaphoric write. A10

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Barry Middleton 22 June 2017

Thanks Nosheen. It is so sad that terrorism will probably continue for some time to come. In the month or so since I wrote this there have been several terror incidents around the world. Tears become exhausted.

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Rajnish Manga 13 June 2017

Heartfelt and humble. This is an acceptance of the grave danger posed by terrorism and there is also a commitment for its cessation once and for all. Our hearts are with the bereaved families. and make this pledge beyond despair to banish terror from the earth

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Barry Middleton 13 June 2017

I fear that it is like banishing evil from the heart of mankind. Perhaps impossible.

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